the coming and going of derko

ok someone i know wrote me this letter asking me for ideas.....
Im putting together a remake of Bills Childhood for my new album. I tied the Bill storyline into my first novels plot: Lee Samson develops schizophrenia and begins to hear voices telling him that his best friend is a demon in disguise. I thought you might be interested.

His best friend is the Hollywood recluse Bill whos downward spiral has almost come to an end after his ground beef/smack addiction causes him to get caught O.D.ing in the bathroom of Tacohut by his manager. Bill goes to see his friend in time of need and Lee shoots him in the fucking face with a revolver and eats his flesh to gain power. Lee goes on a killing spree with much success. However, it is tragically cut short by a housefire that kills him in his sleep.

Lee goes to Hell and ensues in a legal battle for his soul, which is in a litigation gray area since he genuinely was insane when he murdered everybody. Bill didnt get off easy either, he ate children. After an adventure in Hell for a week, everybody gets deported to Purgatory and find a way out (nobody ever has). What do you think?

with this synopsis he gave me threw me some ideas to write a whole story but i needed some motivation so i watched dick tracy in HD and my mind was a flutter 3 hours of straight typing gave me this now i don't punctuate there are no periods your lucky to get a few quotation marks but here is my story i wrote
and i'm hoping on putting more too this adding more to the story getting it cleaned up and hopefully getting into either an animation or at best a comic but still working

Genre: Fantasy